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Man Of Steel8

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EPSON
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Stylus NX510
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I really think you did a great job with the logo! That being said I think you could have gone a little moire into depth with the face. For instance I think you could have rounded the edges of the chin a little more just a bit. You could have also added a bit of depthe to the curl. some shading would have gone a long way with this picture. I like the line underneath the chin but I think your lips needed a bit more expresion. I think by adding the curl with that hairline was worng you either needed to have changed the hairline or lost the curl.

Sincerly with all do respect for a budding artist
-Jo